Feedback

After our presentation we received feedback that we have taken on board and are going to make the suggested changes to the design to ensure that there is a consistancy and to make the concept strong for the final pitch. the feedback comments were mainly focused on the inconsistency of the theme throughout the promotional work and the video that was put together. It was said that the video held the clear theme of the stock market and the wall street route that we want to take the exhibition down. However, the promotional work lacked the fun of the video and didn't demonstrate the theme. This is something that we need to have another look at to see how we can bring in areas of the video in to the designs. It was also said that we need to consider the opening night and the exhibition space more as this was not something we had previously spent much time on therefore was not documented in the pitch. We plan to regroup and look back through the experiments that we have done to see how we can make the designs stronger, taking into consideration the feedback comments.