Monday 25 April 2016

Feedback on Presentation

Following the presentation on Friday we have received feedback on how to develop our response to this brief further. I made the following notes:


After the feedback session we discussed as a group how we are going to take this feedback on board and the changes that we are going to make. We highlighted the main areas that need addressing before the submission are as follows:

- a logo, this will strengthen the branding and identity of the exhibition
- relating the wording to the imagery, this could be shown in the video as well as the poster and invitation designs
- have a completed list of those who we will invite
- refine the presentation so that it is completed to a high standard and contains all the relevant information for the pitch
- adjustments to the video; incorporating some of the students work 

We also hope to be able to produce some physical work so that this can be shown in the submission as well as when we pitch in the following week.

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