Thursday 2 March 2017

Rewritten Facts

The two ways that have been discussed in which the text could be written are presented below. One is written in the voice of the fish and the other from Bear. THe most appropriate will be determined through feedback from the target audience. 

Clown Fish - 'Hey, you found me! I communicate with the rest of my school through clicking and popping noises'

Clown Fish, Bear - 'This is Colin the Clown Fish. He chats to his school of friends through popping and clicking noises'

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