Presentation, send March 14th:
Feedback:
As a group, we found it difficult to communicate with Daniel via email at this time. This has highlighted the limitations of discussions through email. Suggestions can be misunderstood which can cause confusion.
The following day we spoke with Daniel in person and resolved the queries that we had over time constraints and producing new imagery. His comments towards the imagery we had already produced were much more positive and discussions were had over how to strengthen this. In this meeting, Emma and Georgina presented the posters that they had been working on following the feedback.
- Is there a way of presenting the original image to show more depth behind the the abstract imagery?
- Finding a medium between the harsh white shape and the colour overlay will produce a strong design with a cohesive level of depth
- If the strapline feels too forced then leave it out
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